Two folks saw the most spectacular of the sites,
Lit up the roads to reach unprecedented heights.
He laughed her smile once in a while,
she illuminated his darkness on every travelled mile.
His bewilderment came to party,
as he abstracted something upright,
She was lost in the peculiarity of the moment,
as she returned him the delight.
On her way back,
she wasn't lonely, though alone.
And he had sunk in the splendor,
like a crazy rolling stone.
- Mihir Chitre
mihirmumbaikar@gmail.com
5 comments:
Can't help commenting on this one...Obvious reasons!!
Its nice n a 'short n sweet' poem..!!
REALLY amazing....
the last line just won me over... colours a very poetic (read:romantic) picture in front of my eyes. Give me romance over black, anyday! :)
Haha its a great poem Chitre...well, God you guys are using khatarnaak words....
ummmm, I should just thank you. I could never imagine the presence of words like bewilderment,peculiarity of the moment,etc. in poetry :)
u have very well put forward da nice feeling of having sumones thoughts wid us all da time......
Are you in love Mihir? :)
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