Saturday, November 17, 2007

Optimum

You can write in this much light;

It'll suffice to see your thoughts.

Don't throw open the windows;

The sun might blind you.

And don't shut them all either;

Your words may veer off the line.

A slit is what you need.

And you can write in that much light.



I write too. And well at night.

With just enough light for me to write.






- Siddhesh Inamdar

siddhesh.inamdar@gmail.com

3 comments:

Anonymous said...

Profound poetry at it's best!!
I loved the way you have said it all so subtly...Cheers, Sid!
you have only grown as a writer/poet in the 4 years that I have known you!!

Anonymous said...

Hey man! That's what I call 'sublime poetry'.

Magnificence lies in the way you narrate your stuff. Superb!

Do you have a fan club? I wanna join it and if not, let me have the privilege to start it!

Janvi Gandhi said...

OHMYYYGODDDDDDDD! This poem enthralls me with its simplicity. If you write professionally Siddhesh, I'm sure you will have a huge audience. Economy of words to koi aap se seekhe! Maan gaye ustad!