Saturday, December 15, 2007

Plain Jane

I don’t have the long pretty hair,

For you to lose yourself in.

And my cheeks aren’t that fair,

That your touch would make them pink.

I don’t have those deep blue eyes,

In which you might want to drown.

I don’t have the long lashes,

To flutter up and down.

I don’t have a sweet, melodious voice,

That might melt your heart away,

I am not even a tender angel,

That in your arms could sway.

All I am is what you see,

And I am no poets dream,

No fairy tale will tell a tale,

Of the plain-Jane that is me.

I have tried hard and now,

I am tired of this game.

To be a muse, to be a woman,

I don’t want to change

Try to love my smile,

And try to love my frowns,

Try to love my crazy hair,

And my cheeks so brown.

Love me for being who I am,

Else it’s not worth the hype,

I’d rather lose your love my man,

Than be a stereotype!

- Shakti Salgaokar
shaktijs@gmail.com

6 comments:

Vee said...

wow!!:)

Anonymous said...

This one was the best rhyme in the issue.
Hardly do I come across poems that rhyme so well and are so much like the conventional 'rhyming' poems.
I'm amazed at it's simplistic loquaciousness.

Janvi Gandhi said...

It's a very simple theme with fitting use of language. I guess every girl would relate to this poem - love me for what I am, not what you want me to be.

Anonymous said...

well pretty girl,there is someone who wrote about you.or maybe,somebody like you.William Shakespeare's "My Mistress' Eyes"

Anonymous said...

Nice one...It's actually a good thought for all the ghuys to ponder upon! ;)

Mihir said...

Supercool :)
I just drifted through the poem... very well-written!